Smoke Trail for school in need of a critique please

Hello Everyone,
I am new to the website and VFX in general. I am actually working on a project for school where I need to create a smoke trail. I have my first round of testing pretty close to done, but I need a critique on it. What I am trying to achieve and I am finding it difficult to do so, is to make the trail go on for longer but with out it dissipating to fast.

Here is the effect i am going for it starts at 3:49 where the smoke trail comes out from voldemort
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=L-Qm27bhaYw

Here are my renders that I have done
First render-
http://vimeo.com/10684605

Second Render-This one I cut down the animation and slowed down the movements
http://vimeo.com/10691676

Thank you all for the help/critiques in advance it is greatly appreciated.

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